Well done, Clint! Can't believe this is your first attempt at fiction, it's really well done. Great story and excellent and poignantly hilarious ending! I suck at "story making" so really appreciate how well you weave a story for your first time. And effective emotion too.
Great ending! The whole story was depressingly realistic. Not quite the same, but last week someone tweeted "My son just died". I thought it was strange that at a time like that, someone would be thinking about Twitter. There's also a great discussion to be had about legacy. Enjoyed the story very much, though not sure "enjoyed" is quite the word I'm looking for!
OMG! OMG, OMG...I have to say I felt sick and in total amazement as I was reading this. I’m sure there are those out there who would love to do this as their final goodbye.
I really enjoyed this, Clint!
Well done, Clint! Can't believe this is your first attempt at fiction, it's really well done. Great story and excellent and poignantly hilarious ending! I suck at "story making" so really appreciate how well you weave a story for your first time. And effective emotion too.
Excellent work. I loved it and hated it at the same time.
O. Kay O. Henry.
VERY well done!!
Damn, Clint, reading it again, it's good.
First, Take the short out of story.
Proved a point though....we all spend too much time on our phones.
I would be happy to debate with anyone who says otherwise. 🙂
Great ending! The whole story was depressingly realistic. Not quite the same, but last week someone tweeted "My son just died". I thought it was strange that at a time like that, someone would be thinking about Twitter. There's also a great discussion to be had about legacy. Enjoyed the story very much, though not sure "enjoyed" is quite the word I'm looking for!
OMG! OMG, OMG...I have to say I felt sick and in total amazement as I was reading this. I’m sure there are those out there who would love to do this as their final goodbye.